Judge #12- This piece brings to life the small moments that could otherwise pass by unnoticed. Only a broken heart can see this simplicity for such torturous beauty.
Judge #10 says:
The structure fits the ruminations of the protagonist who feels compelled to record specific details and moments along the riverside park. Agree with the editorial note that the ending provides a small lift to the otherwise depressive nature of the telling
Judge 12 says:
Judge #12- This piece brings to life the small moments that could otherwise pass by unnoticed. Only a broken heart can see this simplicity for such torturous beauty.
Judge #10 says:
The structure fits the ruminations of the protagonist who feels compelled to record specific details and moments along the riverside park. Agree with the editorial note that the ending provides a small lift to the otherwise depressive nature of the telling