0 thoughts on “Out of Weighted Darkness (short story)”
#Judge10 says:
The author uses a familiar literary device (diary) and thematic questions (how is identity affected by sensory deprivation? do relationships make us human?) in his tale of calm resolution. Excellently written, tone and mood consistently developed throughout.
Judge #4 says:
Riveting. The steadily rising mystery and tension is well balanced by the declining mental and physical state of the narrator.
Judge #9 says:
I’m a huge fan of using a diary format to tell a story. This was very effective and grew as you read the story.
Judge #5 says:
Judge #5:
Exceptionally well written poetic meditation on extended solitude and deprivation. Great imagery. Suspenseful. Perfect title.
#Judge10 says:
The author uses a familiar literary device (diary) and thematic questions (how is identity affected by sensory deprivation? do relationships make us human?) in his tale of calm resolution. Excellently written, tone and mood consistently developed throughout.
Judge #4 says:
Riveting. The steadily rising mystery and tension is well balanced by the declining mental and physical state of the narrator.
Judge #9 says:
I’m a huge fan of using a diary format to tell a story. This was very effective and grew as you read the story.
Judge #5 says:
Judge #5:
Exceptionally well written poetic meditation on extended solitude and deprivation. Great imagery. Suspenseful. Perfect title.