Judge #12- Kim’s piece captures all of the colorful characters, mundane banter and unexpected plot-twists that, added together, can make another day-in-the-life something memorable after all. A short snapshot, but a thoughtful piece nonetheless.
Judge #10 says:
This is a distinctive work that pulled me along, wanting to know more about this odd, quirky job situation with these unusual characters. Nice sensory details overall (sounds, colors). Check the spelling of Lorraine on first reference, and perhaps tone down some of the more awkward verbiage (such as “borderline euphemistic monikers”). But all in all, very effective.
Judge 12 says:
Judge #12- Kim’s piece captures all of the colorful characters, mundane banter and unexpected plot-twists that, added together, can make another day-in-the-life something memorable after all. A short snapshot, but a thoughtful piece nonetheless.
Judge #10 says:
This is a distinctive work that pulled me along, wanting to know more about this odd, quirky job situation with these unusual characters. Nice sensory details overall (sounds, colors). Check the spelling of Lorraine on first reference, and perhaps tone down some of the more awkward verbiage (such as “borderline euphemistic monikers”). But all in all, very effective.