0 thoughts on “ACCOUNT OF A WELL-DIGGER, CIRCA 2090”
Judge #2 says:
This is a companion piece to MARS, a prose version if you will. Same compelling imagery of capitalistic greed and its aftermath on its pawns.
I loved this description of the relationship: “a certain tenderness in the absence of loneliness.”
Judge #9 says:
The imagery of this writer is far beyond 18 years of age. The descriptions of a future world are vivid as well as the description of the love language of food.
With a bit of editing this will be even more compelling.
Craig Petreikis says:
This piece is magical. The first sentences set this off as a list message found from long ago, but we are in the future. The writing is full of desperation, and angst. Good balance of imagery and emotion. Well done!
Judge #2 says:
This is a companion piece to MARS, a prose version if you will. Same compelling imagery of capitalistic greed and its aftermath on its pawns.
I loved this description of the relationship: “a certain tenderness in the absence of loneliness.”
Judge #9 says:
The imagery of this writer is far beyond 18 years of age. The descriptions of a future world are vivid as well as the description of the love language of food.
With a bit of editing this will be even more compelling.
Craig Petreikis says:
This piece is magical. The first sentences set this off as a list message found from long ago, but we are in the future. The writing is full of desperation, and angst. Good balance of imagery and emotion. Well done!